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The Sea
By gedbackland
31 July 2007
My Daughter


We'd adopted her from the city

I don’t like all this nature thing she said

Her big, brown moist marbles 

Staring at me in mock defiance

But the only trees she'd seen before

Where on cartoons

Which is why she drew them like lollipops

And as for horses 

She’d only ever seen a plastic pony

Out of someone elses christmas cracker


It’s boring too green and stoopid

She stamped hoping for attention she no longer needed

There are two things of that summer 

That I will hold close forever

The colours that danced the backs of the mackeral

And the look in my new daughters eyes

When she first saw the sea


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Written by Phil (6845 comments posted) 1st August 2007
I hope you've never loked back. Kids don't like being removed from their comfort zones - no matter how uncomfortable they are. 
 
Liked this. 
 
Phil.

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