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| The Sea | |
| By gedbackland | ||||
| 31 July 2007 | ||||
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My Daughter
We'd adopted her from the city I don’t like all this nature thing she said Her big, brown moist marbles Staring at me in mock defiance But the only trees she'd seen before Where on cartoons Which is why she drew them like lollipops And as for horses She’d only ever seen a plastic pony Out of someone elses christmas cracker
It’s boring too green and stoopid She stamped hoping for attention she no longer needed There are two things of that summer That I will hold close forever The colours that danced the backs of the mackeral And the look in my new daughters eyes When she first saw the sea
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