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By Talisker
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31 July 2007 |
Tiree Moments 2007
The air, light
Clover sweet
Whispers of sea
Firm sand fits my feet
A sleek basking shark
Big as a bus
Slices water, green and dark
Oli 16/07/07
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Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 1st August 2007 | This has echoes of a haiku - not my favourite form - but as this is longer, it works much better. (For me) Like mussels - there's a combining of the outer world and the inner Oli here. Phil. |
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