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Poetry
Beach Walk
By Talisker
31 July 2007
Tiree Moments 2007

The air, light

Clover sweet

Whispers of sea

Firm sand fits my feet

 

A sleek basking shark

Big as a bus

Slices water, green and dark

 

Oli 16/07/07

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Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 1st August 2007
This has echoes of a haiku - not my favourite form - but as this is longer, it works much better. (For me) 
 
Like mussels - there's a combining of the outer world and the inner Oli here. 
 
Phil.

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