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Poetry
Waxing Cold
By uche
31 July 2007

Feelings familiar to us


Glow 
of candle
like watered milk, flickering; 
 
moths, 
motley-hued and
powder-winged, fluttering; 
 
heart
strung, pulsating, 
like a frenzied song; 
 
tossing
on the bed
is the feel of rock on bare back
 
I wait
for the cognac of your tongue  
your fingers as fire in my blood 
 
endlessly, 
I wait.


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