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Poetry
Circles
By maipenrai
01 August 2007
It's like going around in circles
talking to you
I would be better banging my head
against the wall of this cell you keep me in,
you speak of honesty and truth
yet
you live by your lies and deceit.

but you will never
find the truth nor touch my soul
the darkness of your mind
will never corrupt the
everlasting goodness in this world.

so use your implements
the one's that tear and break,
your electric that burns and sears
the flesh of all who oppose you,
you know yourself
that you have lost,
humanity will survive
and hope will live forever in
this gentle soul.

Father Forgive Me
For I Have Sinned.

Reviews

Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 1st August 2007
So, Pandora's legend lives on? 
 
Bleak and effective. Liked the ending. 
 
Phil.
Hi
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 2nd August 2007
thanks Phil. 
Bernie
Hi
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 2nd August 2007
thanks Phil. 
Bernie

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