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Beautiful Blue Eyes
By EmmaSparrow
21 August 2007
This was a poem I wrote about somebody that I really liked, but he disappeared and I didn't see again. Its quite personal really.

Beautiful blue eyes,

you hurt me so bad.

the way you left, without a trace,

did you mean to make me sad?

I thought I'd found my angel from above,

even stupid enough to have fallen in love.

Since then my hearts been crying,

you once said you loved me,

I guess you were lying.

I cast love spells in my dreams at night,

but your not coming back

and it cuts like a knife.

I've heard that you've tried to end it all,

if you'd let me back in,

next time my love will break the fall.

Either way, I just hope that you are alright,

and wherever you are,

I hope that your safe tonight.

Oh, beautiful blue eyes,

they hold so much pain,

who would have thought

I'd never see them again.

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Emma
Written by audrie (444 comments posted) 22nd August 2007
unrequited love hurts doesn't it? 
 
I am just about to put a poem on, Caught in the Silver, which I hope will give you something to look forward to! 
 
Best of luck!

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