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| Beautiful Blue Eyes | |
| By EmmaSparrow | ||||
| 21 August 2007 | ||||
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This was a poem I wrote about somebody that I really liked, but he disappeared and I didn't see again. Its quite personal really. Beautiful blue eyes, you hurt me so bad. the way you left, without a trace, did you mean to make me sad? I thought I'd found my angel from above, even stupid enough to have fallen in love. Since then my hearts been crying, you once said you loved me, I guess you were lying. I cast love spells in my dreams at night, but your not coming back and it cuts like a knife. I've heard that you've tried to end it all, if you'd let me back in, next time my love will break the fall. Either way, I just hope that you are alright, and wherever you are, I hope that your safe tonight. Oh, beautiful blue eyes, they hold so much pain, who would have thought I'd never see them again.
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