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Poetry
Autumn, Ten p.m.
By Edith
18 August 2005

What do you think?


A dog chases sloe bats

The air is thick with yelping

The bats listen to the strobing greed

Amused in their ether comfort

Happy are the bats

Happy is the dog

Each to his purpose

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Written by jean.day (2364 comments posted) 3rd October 2005
I liked this a lot. Nice choice of words and very much to the point.

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