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Poetry
Ice Box
By Talisker
23 August 2007

How remote you appear

Snow capped peak

From my sunburnt valley

Somehow wrong, somehow false,

Visible, unattainable,

Dazzling, perilous

 

And here’s a little piece of you

Stored behind a secret door

A crystal world where tiny glaciers

Await my fizzing glass

 

Oli 23/08/07

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3369 comments posted) 23rd August 2007
Now this is poetic ying to snoddy's yang. I quite liked it some of the images you conjured up but I'm left bemused. Perhaps if you put a "thine" or "cleaved" in I might have got it. That way you know it's poetry 
Jane

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