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By -jellyacey-
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25 August 2007 |
Hopeless dreams fly so far away
To a distant mountain I can never reach
While time passes it gets higher
And I stay here trying to suppress my tears
It’s hard to go on living this life in reluctance
Casting shadows with billions of people suppressing you
With no one to care…
No one for me to love.
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Not hopeless
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 25th August 2007 | | At 13 years of age you surely cannot think that your "dreams" have flown away? You have a lifetime to achieve them and in 5 years' time you will have forgotten why you felt "hopeless". I am sure your parents would be surprised to think that you felt no-one loves you. During teenage years, or after, don't get infatuation confused with real love. There is a huge difference as you'll soon discover. Whenever you feel hopeless, look or listen to the news and put yourself in someone else's shoes. Then you'll know what "hopeless" really means. Pick yourself up, dust yourself down and enjoy every day to the full. We all love you even if nobody else does! |
Written by -jellyacey- (22 comments posted) 25th August 2007 | | haha thanks!xD I did sound sort of emo back there... eeewww... by the way I'm 14 ~puffs chest proudly.xD~ | Hi Jellacey,
Written by audrie (451 comments posted) 26th August 2007 | I think adults don't always remember just how hard and painful teenage years can be. The emotions are all over the place and the heartaches so deep and draining. I think for a 14 year old your poetry shows an astonishing maturity. Keep it up!
audrie x |
Written by -jellyacey- (22 comments posted) 26th August 2007 | | thank you...xD I'm really glad you liked it.xD |
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