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By tartqueen
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19 August 2005 |
This is probably the shortest poem I've ever written. I lived my life With the radio on, And I've always loved Listening to songs, But the ones I remember Are the saddest ones. |
So true
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 19th August 2005 | I also re-write their lyrics so they fit like a glove.
I like simple direct works like this one, just 24 words.
And its's set me off, I must start writing or at least polishing.
Thanks for this and for your review.
Brian |
Written by niki (6 comments posted) 6th October 2006 | | Beautiful, simple, just enough to make a point. It's nice to be moved by something so minimal and understated. Good stuff! |
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