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Corporate Culture in verse (part 3): "Work"
By Sinnerman_Pfank
29 August 2007
Hello again

I wrote this after reading that many US-based companies subject their staff to random drug tests.

Sinnerman

Yeah, I've done "work" a few times-
It started as a laugh
Everyone was doing it;
At least half of the staff.

First time, I'd been drinking -
I wasn't thinking straight
All my friends had tried it-
Though they said it wasn't great.

I'd do a little "work" on Monday
Otherwise, I'd stay clean
Quietly sitting at my desk
But making sure that I was seen.

But slowly, it’s grip tightened
I did it more and more
I couldn't rest at my desk
I had to go and score.

Come in early, show initiative-
Though I was never caught -
Getting my hands on “work”
Became my only thought.

Finally, my life had meaning
I had self-respect and pride
Though my friends were worried
It just felt right, inside.

But gradually, “work” took over
I was doing all I could
On the train, at weekends
Suddenly, it wasn't good.

Over time, the buzz just faded
What was I trying to prove?
I began to look back with nostalgia
To my old "work"-free, useless, groove.

I vowed to break my addiction
Leave early, Friday's off "sick"
Long coffee breaks, poor performance
This “work” habit, I would kick!

Yeah, I've done “work” a few times
But It's months since my last hit
And believe me when I tell you
I'm desperately trying to quit.

Reviews
Very Funny
Written by Josie (2632 comments posted) 29th August 2007
I guess "work" became rather addictive to you then? Good poem, but there were a few places where the rhythm went a little bit off-beat, if you see what I mean. You slowed up when it came to the coffee breaks. ha ha. 
 
As for me: 
 
Work? 
 
Yes, I’sometimes try to do it 
But the work which I like most 
Is working out my rhyming lines 
Over morning tea and toast. 
 
I have done most of my poems first thing in the morning when my brain is in motion.  

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