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| Jack and Jill and him and her and them and you and me. | |
| By josibug | ||||
| 30 August 2007 | ||||
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thinking maybe of changing the title...... that's it. read, please.
Jack and Jill went up the hill With nothing much to alter Jack fell down and broke his crown And left Jill with the water. Ten years later, here I am Wond'ring what to ask her Finding things I thought I knew And waiting to unmask her. Jack moaned and Jack groaned While Jill got out the paper. Jill's address still in his head He said he'd see her later. Jill was only seventeen, She didn't want a master. She was only three weeks old Yet innocence had passed her. I wish I'd known you years ago When you were so much stronger. Monopoly is just a game And rules just make it longer. Jack went uphill all alone Wond'ring what to make her. Jack ignored the dancing girls, He wanted just to take her. Jill was left in London town, Daddy's darling daughter, Crying tears of silent joy. Vodka bottles and water. No-one ever asked me why My chest is feeling tighter. I was tucked up in my bed Dreaming of a fighter. You were standing right outside Hands no longer together. You were waiting by my bed For the end of forever. You were wond'ring, so am I, Wond'ring how to ask her, Scared of what response I'll get Not wanting to unmask her. Jack and Jill went up the hill With history I can't alter. Jack went this way, Jill went right And left me with the water.
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