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| By RegisteredGhost | ||||
| 03 September 2007 | ||||
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I'm not sure of an introduction, I was thinking of branching the poem out a bit but I'm not even sure I like it as it stands. Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. On the page in the battlefield words jockey for position helmets gleam in the midday sun exclamation points at the ready adjectives race to the fore shining horns held high knocking nouns from their places prepositional phrases daisy-chain so their horses prance across the page while insisting tunic-garbed verbs go first pronouns march in smug satisfaction to the drumbeats of selfless fragments as adverbs guard the rear from erasure.
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