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Poetry
Irish Scene
By tartqueen
21 August 2005
As part of a creative writing course we were challenged to write a poem that didn't contain any adjectives.  This was the result.

Walking through the country lanes

The hedges saturated with honeysuckle

The scent drifting like smoke

Away over the fields.

 

The first sign of the village

Is the church spire

Looming over the trees

like the mast of a ship.

 

Walk past the five pubs

And the grotto

Where the statue of the Virgin stands

In a halo of flowers.

 

On past the fish and chip shop

Where my cousin Mary works

And people sit outside in their cars

Waiting for their fish to be cooked.

 

My parent's house stands back from the lane

Along a track of earth and stones

Where rabbits appear at night

Vanishing before the car's headlights.

 

Their house sits in a dip

So it can only just be seen from the road

And here their lives are lived

With the constant smell of the sea.

Reviews
amazing
Written by darrenmc (54 comments posted) 21st August 2005
I can't believe how much imagery there is without a single adjective, well done, very vivid
Damit to hell
Written by idlemusings (80 comments posted) 22nd August 2005
That's better poetry than I can write with a whole truckload of adjectives, while balanced on a stack of Thesauruses and on the phone to Shakespeare. 
 
Skilled work indeed.  

Written by Bagheera (680 comments posted) 23rd August 2005
You have also described the village (fictional) in which my latest magnum opus is set - and I haven't even posted the first Chapter here or anywhere else yet!!! 
 
Beautiful imagery, loved it: well done!! :grin

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