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I never thought...
By onlyhattie
06 September 2007
This poem is just a rough thing I thought up over lunch again.

It's about a relationship I was in a while ago that turned a bit sour.

I thought that I'd be fine alone
I wouldn't be that scared
Had no idea I'd be depressed
And no one even cared

I thought that we were so happy
Could I have been more wrong?
And even though I tried my best
It didn't last that long

I never thought I'd cry so much
Turns out I missed you bad
I thought you knew me really well
The closest friend I had

But now I know, the effort I made
Fell like water through a crack
For all the things I said to you
You never loved me back

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Written by tornlove09 (4 comments posted) 6th September 2007
I can see that you really put your heart into this. I can relate to your words. Very well done 8)

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