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| Love's End | |
| By tornlove09 | ||||||
| 07 September 2007 | ||||||
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Her heart beats Fast could this moment Be her last His eyes pierce Through her making Her crash
She leans into him A gentle kiss on The lips, he takes her Hand stroking it
Her hair falls Loosely, her breath Becomes hot He leaves sensation On her bearing heart
Yet the time has come He must leave Her now, a young man Drafted That’s all he is now
He had dreams He wished to start A family with her
But those dreams Are gone she tells him To stay strong
He says he loves her And they will never Be broken apart
The days past And the months go on She is all-alone Her soldier is Gone.
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