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seventh day five and dime
By andybyers
07 September 2007
god's wife come into the store
sez i overcharged her on bananas
well i didn't but whattayah gonna say
    it's god's wife
i don't need no trouble
so i give her the difference
she buys an apple
    y'know one bloody apple
meeting a friend for lunch she sez
and slithers off
(she might be god's wife but i never liked her)

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Written by RegisteredGhost (9 comments posted) 7th September 2007
Oooo, I really like this one. Very much so, love the one apple and the slitherin', great touch.

Written by Phil (6681 comments posted) 7th September 2007
Never liked her either, stuck up cow. 
 
Last five lines very good. 
 
Phil.

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