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Free of the Land
By andybyers
07 September 2007
    Born in the church,
She was married out of wedlock
    Never saw the day she didn't night

The whole west production
    Brought her everything she wanted
And everything she wanted was in sight

    Owe, how they waited
To be ushered to her exits
    And manicure themselves in all her charm

And lingering behind her
    In somnambulistic chill
They winter-watched him take her by the arm.

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Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 7th September 2007
Riddled beyond me. Sorry. 
 
Owe? 
 
:?  
 
Phil.
Is it
Written by AnnieSeed (128 comments posted) 7th September 2007
about the sun? Or have I got it completely wrong?

Written by andybyers (181 comments posted) 7th September 2007
Hi, Annie... there are no wrong answers. If that's what the words invoke in you, that's what it means. :)

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