My hobby is working as an indie developer, so I write a lot of texts related to games, especially the one project I'm involved in, currently known as Radakan. Any kind of feedback is appreciated here; typos, odd sentences, things that are hard to get, lack in natural speach, holes in plot, anything. Btw, I'm not one to reply harshly if I get some criticism. To me, constructive criticism is often the best possible feedback. Do pay attention to those two ever so important words though: Constructive criticism. Criticism alone can quickly become very hostile. Thanks for your time!