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Black-magic breakfast
By andybyers
12 September 2007
skullcap and MiniWheats, bad mix
    milk pours out the eye sockets
picture that all over my slacks
also, a wooden spoon
    that screams like mandrake root
    whatever. Pass the sugar

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Written by Phil (6681 comments posted) 13th September 2007
Humdrum breakfast of the supernaturally gifted.  
 
Another question - not about meaning this time. Why the mix of punctuation - some in, some out? 
 
Honestly not trying to start another debate - just interested. 
 
Phil.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 14th September 2007
I liked this. Wasn't a fan of the slightly bizarre punctuation etc but I liked the eye socket image and the spoon scremaing like a mandrake root. Had something about it. 
 
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