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| Lady Luck (Revised) | |
| By Aurora | ||||||||||
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This poem has been published in an anthology entitled "Magic of the Muse" it is one of my favorites! All comments gratefully recieved! I have tried to improve the iambic pentameter on this and have implemented indenting. Thanks for the help, Hope this improves things! Lady Luck When life is getting you down, Nothing is going your way, Just call up lady luck, Ask her to make your day. She’ll change things in a heartbeat, She will turn your life around, Magically she’ll lift Your feet up off the ground. The buses that come at once, The lucky seven dice roll, You will soon have that job, Breaking free from the dole. But do not count your chickens, And don’t you dare jump that gun, Nothing is guaranteed, She may be having fun!
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