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To All The Poems That I Forgot
By Talisker
12 September 2007
Probably inspired by Julio Iglesias' masterpiece "To All The Girls I've Loved Before".

Probably.

To all the poems that I forgot,

(and trust me, that is quite a lot);

that formed within my leaky head,

dripped out and then were left for dead;

that scratched upon my etch-a-sketch,

were shook before a pen was fetched;

that laughed in their creator’s face,

when PC froze in time and space;

that drooled upon my sleeping pillow,

dried to leave a stain in yellow;

that left my head by pure osmosis,

killing brain cells in the process;

that came with passion unassuaged,

whilst I was otherwise engaged;

I wonder why I give a jot,

for all the poems that I forgot;

but I love them all.

 

Oli 12/09/07

Reviews
I liked it!
Written by Aurora (64 comments posted) 12th September 2007
I liked the rhyming couplets throughout this poem and I think there was a good rhythm throughout. The last line really stood out and gave the poem a reall warm feel that I didn't expect. Enjoyed it! 
 
Question: I thought that every line in a poem had to begin with a captital letter, is this style special or can all poems be written without them? (I'm still finding my feet with Grammer!)
Thanks Aurora
Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 12th September 2007
Great name, BTW. 
 
Rules schmules! I please myself as the muse takes me, sometimes capitals, sometimes no punctuation at all, sometimes semi-colons... 
 
Surely excess rules are anathema to artists. I stick to accurate spelling and grammar so far as I can. Try to make sense and be readable. Punctuation is largely an artistic thing though, subjective, no right or wrong. 
 
Thanks for your kind review - I'll look out for your work. 
 
Oli 
:)
HI Oli
Written by fellpony (1647 comments posted) 12th September 2007
Nice t' see you back here. I can empathise (I know it's an americanism but it says what I mean) with scratched upon my etch-a-sketch, ... shook before a pen was fetched;  
 
I have a writing pad by the bed to try to prevent this loss, but seldom put the light on 'cos I don't want to wake husband ... ah the gems that I must have lost to marital harmony! 
 
Aurora - cCapital letters at the Start of lines was a Fashion in Poetry Books of the old school. Word will auto-capitalise the start of a line after you press the Enter key, type and press the spacebar; unless you turn it off. Elli once commented on this quirk in my poetry - which was mainly induced by Word - and now I think twice about first-letter-of-line-capitals. Mostly I turn them off these days.  
 
Oli is above such things :) and quite right too. Do whatever makes your poem say clearly what you want it to say in the form that you have chosen.
To the poems you forgot - - -
Written by Josie (2823 comments posted) 12th September 2007
I agree with your poem Oli and have to admit that it's not only poems that are being forgotten these days, More often than not it's appointments and thinking of new excuses is the problem. Can you remember all the poems that you have written? there must be hundreds! Have you ever counted? An interesting poem.
Poetry rules the rules of poetry .
Written by patterjack (1314 comments posted) 12th September 2007
and , I must add that...
Written by patterjack (1314 comments posted) 12th September 2007
... I wish that i didn't so often break the rules of the keyboard as I did above.  
 
I have always felt that a genius supercedes a rule without any loss -- others who break rules should have at least a knowledge of the rules they are breaking--it doubles their strength . 
 
e.e.cummings is an example -- and Emily Dickinson in her way. 
 
Shakespeare was no slouch at going outside the rules either ! 
 
patterjack 
 

Written by Phil (6828 comments posted) 13th September 2007
My problem is: I don't yet know all the rules - good point Brian. 
 
The poem: very warm feeling to it. Last line the clincher. Liked it very much. 
 
Phil.
BTW
Written by Phil (6828 comments posted) 13th September 2007
I hope the yellow stains are only on your pillow. :grin

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 14th September 2007
And there is always the sneaking suspicion that the one of the ones you forgot was the masterpiece that was going to take the world by storm.... :grin  
 
Reminded me a bit of a Beautiful South song. Liked it. 
 
E
Oli,
Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 15th October 2007
I too liked the rhythm and the sentiment of this poem. 
 
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