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The Constant Fight
By JakeWilding
13 September 2007

This just came to me one night...not much needs to be said.


They fight day and night
Positivus struggles to find the light
They stand either side of me
But i'm the only one that can see

They shout at me to gain control
All they do is dig a deeper hole
My guardian is not there
The fight is too strong for me to bear

How can i end this once and for all
Is it just my time to fall
How do i think of Postitivus
When Negativus keeps control of us

Some days i think i can get well
But then again, I already see the gates of Hell.

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