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Seven Months
By tornlove09
14 September 2007
Seven Months ago I was sexually assaulted. 

                                                 Seven months

Have gone by

A scar imprinted

On my life.

 

A confession not

Believed, truth was

Spoken but so were

Lies, so why must

The tears always come

From my eyes?

 

Strength is nothing

My scars will never heal

Emptiness is left, a part

                                          Of me that no longer feels.                                             

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Powerful
Written by Faerieanna (25 comments posted) 14th September 2007
and brave writing. 
 
Too personal to comment on. 
 
I hope that writing can be part of the healing process for you. 
 
I will reply to your message separately. 
 
Take care, 
 
Anna x

Written by ellipinnock (1790 comments posted) 14th September 2007
Read your latest peice first and then this. Brave certainly covers it and I'm with Anna on this - too personal to comment on. Hopefully cathartic for you. 
 
Elli
The start of healing
Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 14th September 2007
I hope.

Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 14th September 2007
Nothing to add. Endorse the above. 
 
Phil

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