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Untitled for now
By tornlove09
14 September 2007

  

 

 


  I hate you,

You love me

I detest you,

You comfort me

 

I ignore you

You hear me

 

I cut you

And I bleed

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Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 14th September 2007
Hmmm. I have to say that I'd have liked more to get my teeth into on this one. The last two lines have a hint of something interesting but the rest is just too cliche for me - been done too many times before. Sorry to be negative, this just wasn't my kind of thing. 
 
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