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Poetry
Electric
By maipenrai
14 September 2007
I'ts a wonder is electric.
don't know a lot about it
not that bright,
use it to do my cooking,
washing,to watch the
dumb dumb shows on the box,
freaks and wannabe's
sad needy clowns,
but not as sad as the
real reality show on the
nightly news
where the living and dying is hard.

It's a wonder is electric,
use it to find my way home
after a night of booze and
bullshit talk, saving the world
with my JD wisdom, home
to listen to Kris and Leonard,
but you know?

I think I may have ued electric
in a different way,
at least that's what my dreams tell me
nightmares of currents and screams
cattle prods and burning flesh,
seems I may have used electric once,
wonder how I forgot

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Written by Phil (5967 comments posted) 14th September 2007
Needs a quick proof Bernie. 
 
Seems anything can be turned to a darker purpose. 
 
Phil 
 
Hi
Written by maipenrai (775 comments posted) 15th September 2007
thanks Phil. 
Bernie

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