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Victimized
By tornlove09
15 September 2007
My story as a victim

i wanna run but my feet wont move
im helpless there's nothing left to do
you took my life away but im still here
no longer can i shed any tears

why did you do that
even when i said no
i became weak and
lost it all

now its so hard to even
get through the day
always i hear
"Chloe, are you ok"?

Im not ok
and i dont know
when i will be all I
know is that I will
never be the same

I used to care about how
I looked in the morning
and now I just walk out

you caused me so much pain
and now you must get yours
I hope they got you
and your away behind bars

you will never understand
what you did to me
look me in the eyes
you have killed me.

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