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Early Risers
By Keller
17 September 2007
This is a poem about my 1 year-old niece and is dedicated to her :-)

She's learnt the sound of the toaster:
the clatter-clang her stomach's
call to arms.
A hungry hand reaches
for her share of buttered bread:
placing her claim on my breakfast.

A corner of toast triumphantly sucked
and squeezed between fingers.
Liquid butter hand prints
spread across her dress
while grasping hands
await a second trophy.

She shies from damp cloth
wiped across her face,
eyes screwed in knots
mouth tightly locked.

I brush crumbs from my jumper,
and, without a pause,
she wipes hers off too.

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Written by Fledermaus (3286 comments posted) 17th September 2007
The first stanza had a strange rythm, especially compared to the others. I'm usually not too fond of linebreaks in the middle of something, but the last two stanzas were nice. Especially the last three lines flow well.

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