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| Our World | |
| By halina | ||||||
| 19 September 2007 | ||||||
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The world that we live in is only getting worse We're like a bubble ready to burst with trees that are missing and never replaced what is happening to our beautiful place? The animal kingdom is slowly fading out the rivers are drying we are having a drought I hope the world gets better very soon or we will be a planet just like the moon sarah
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Great job. Also the moon part I think would be better if it was Mars or something, a planet. The rhythm was a little off but that is ok. Thanks for the read
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