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| Primrose Path Of My Feelings | |
| By Larnyx | ||||||||
| 19 September 2007 | ||||||||
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Hey there whoever chose to read this. This particular piece of work isn't exactly cheerful. I'd had what seemed the worst week of my life. And i still can't see the light at the end of the tunnel. But my friends have told me its ok, so i thought it'd be good to post it. enjoy! Larnyx Achrabige
Primrose Path Of My Feelings I don't know what I've done. Or if I like this journey I've begun. Somewhere back at the crossroads My lifes path changed tracks. Suddenly here I am all alone, Heading off to parts unknown I walk this primrose path Of sunshine smiles and daily rhyming. It's here I find my greatest depression. Here where I know eternal crying. Too hard to turn back. Too scared to move on. looking for shortcuts through the trees to paths friends have gone. The path of nettles, bindies, an imprisoned mess. But at least there I find no loneliness. I walk this primrose path Of sunshine smiles and daily rhyming It's here I find my greatest depression. Here where I know eternal crying. I stand and look at my life in pieces. A disguised past of hidden lying. I lay down bare of all, left with secrets, regrets, alone dying. I walk this primrose path. Where above shine greatly the Stars. Here I find my greatest depression. Of eternally bleeding scars.
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