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For Sale - Cat Piss Convent
By Talisker
19 September 2007
Hopefully the formatting is sorted out!

For Sale – Cat Piss Convent


Such a shock to see
the “For Sale” sign
a rigid, white
flag of surrender


The acrid stench of cat piss
still clings around the place
like a descended cloud


Nuns, like clockwork puffins
scuttle in and out, hastily
God is a hard taskmaster


I wonder where old nuns go
Surely not straight to heaven
in a removal van
And what about the cats?


My dog is straining
to get at them,
the cats, or nuns


I tug her lead
and we move on
full of ponderings


Oli 19/09/07

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Written by Phil (6738 comments posted) 19th September 2007
Where do old nuns go? Or do they die on the job? (So to speak) An odd life, but I guess it must suit some - odd people. 
 
Your dog - the nuns, I think. 
 
The brides of Christ probably have their minds on other things and don't notice the cat piss - mixed with the incontinent dribbles of their aging sisters. 
 
Liked this. I wonder if your dog is still confused. 
 
Phil. 

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