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Little Miss Kitty

By halina

20 September 2007

I am a lost Kitten
a long way from home
I am scared of being
out here on my own

I feel so confused
I've never been out before
the only place I know
is by the back door

I wish someone will
find me and take me home
I don't like being out here all alone

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Little Miss Kitty
Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 20th September 2007

Hello Halina. Glad you tried a children's poem, and such a delightful first poem. You'd need to cut the second line of the second verse down to: I feel so confused - never been out before - because there is one too many words to get the rhythm correct. Then you need four lines for the last verse (as I expect you know) with 2 beats in each line as in the other verses. This is something that is a challenge, yet easy to do. I've done it hundreds of times. Well done.

Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 21st September 2007

A good poem, but I agree with Josie, the last stanza should have the same rythm, then it's a realy nice thing.

Sweet poem!
Written by Aurora (67 comments posted) 4th October 2007

Really captures what a cats life can be like, I have a neighbors cat who always tries to come in my house and live with me! she'd like this poem! lol! :grin

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