Poetry
Awakened
By andybyers
22 September 2007
In tribute to North American suburbia.

It offered up its soul; it said
    from this ancient forest, farmland laid,
    take your seat at your desk
        run with your friends
        kiss her
    learn an instrument
    ride back from the movies, retelling the tale
    water the lawn with your own sweat,
        as the hunter, the farmer, upon this ground

There are those who will tell you
    there are those will would say
that soul is found only
    upon the straightest of streets,
    — places without curves,
                    colour,
                    canopy —
    in crumbling buildings where
    people pay proudly too much to live above laundromats
        trap rats, despise their no(i)sy neighbours
or
    bang on radiators in winter,
    squinting suspiciously, out frosted single-glazing,
    at cars
    from other streets,
        other towns:
            places unworthy and homes unequal
like yours

they're lying

say so

Reviews

Written by Phil (8763 comments posted) 22nd September 2007
I guess in a land that was 'won,' the dominant culture will invent its own mythology - wrong word, but I know what I mean. Like any civilisation, it solidifies to truth but is challenged and develops at the same time. 
 
Liked this one - its contrasts and ideas. 
 
Phil

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