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up up and away
By andybyers
22 September 2007
she sent up nipples like balloons
my mouth the unrepentant sky
cloudbursts followed

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Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 22nd September 2007
Back to being 'striooed' naked. 
 
Haikuesk in style and delivery. The last line offers all sorts of possibilities! 
 
I'm just wondering if Summer is actually a person, not a season. ;)  
 
Phil.

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