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Never Alone
By maipenrai
29 August 2005
who or what are your hidden bogymen?

My Mama Told me

dont be afraid

the bogymen are not real

and you will never be alone dearest

Mama will always be with you

 

years and years have gone by

and Mama is dead

but sometimes in this place

where I now live

I see her, in my lucid moments I see her

she tells me, see you will never be alone

and dont be afraid dearest

the bogymen are not real

and Mama will always be with you

 

but when they give me my tablets

the ones that make me sleepy

the ones that make me dribble

I talk to my secret friends

who live inside my head

and it is true

I will never be alone

and the bogymen are not real

thats what Mama said

 

but Mama is dead

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I've read this before and elsewhere.
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 9th October 2005
What a chilling seemingly accurate picture of drug sedated panic/hysteria you have painted. 
 
A superb read. 
 
Brian.
never alone
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 24th June 2006
thanks

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