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The Force is With You
By maipenrai
29 August 2005

The Force is with You

feel the power, feel the strengh

we cannot be beaten

you know that, dont you?

 

but where are we going

and for what reason must

I leave my homeland

my wife, my child

 

Fool

do you not know or

understand your place

it as been decreed that you must go

and for the likes of you that is enough

and for such as you what greater

honour is there but to die for

your countrys leaders

 

now there boy

be still, be at peace

come

dry your tears

the Force is with you

Reviews

Written by jean.day (2290 comments posted) 3rd October 2005
I really liked this. It is powerful and probably true but very scarey.

Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 24th June 2006
Been Away ,so just a late Thank You

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