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| By tornlove09 | ||||
| 23 September 2007 | ||||
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Please don't hesitate to comment on my poetry, I know its very emotional and deep but I appreciate all comments
waiting anticipating
questions running
through my head
whats going on
i think about these
things as i lay on
my bed
trying to concentrate
for exams yet it comes
back reminding me where
i am and what took place
the 1st amendment,
it gives u freedom
but my freedom
was taken away
as you violated me
you think you
can do what you
want and say what
ever you feel like
saying, just wait
till it catches up with
you and ends your
life.
it's just so hard
you dont know
how i feel
somedays are
fine yet
other days i
want to run
away from
everything and
cry my eyes out
but no tears
fall
on the outside
i look the same
but on the inside
im a burning flame
its hard to put
out growing bigger
as ever making me
weak.
i go to sleep
thinking its over
but you haunt
me in my dreams
i scream but no one
comes to save me
you tell me
its ok and
hold me in your
arms as i cry
into your shoulder
wispering words
of wisdom into
my ear but my
emotions block
them and no
longer can i hear.
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