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This one is written specifically for being read aloud more than reading on the page. Total experiment, let me know if it works? Thanks heaps! This, This is the place she lives, the place she breathes; in this water in the roots of this tree, her fingers tangled in your hair. Can you not hear her speak your name? Hers is there on your lips, you can taste it on your tongue: metallic letters on skin like blood. This, This is the place she sleeps, she's not been hiding but this way is sometimes dark, and you have often turned your head and closed your eyes. This, This is the place she lives, the place she breathes; buried here in the earth, her throat full of leaves and moonlight in her eyes. Turn and look, and take her hand because you already know her and she has a secret to tell. This, This is the place I live, the place I breathe; she did not leave me, I just forgot that I had lungs.
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