This is chapter four - I realise the last couple of chapters have been very short but I feel it is important for the reader to understand the actions and feelings of both of my main characters.

I originally wrote this story purely from Elly's point of view but I didn't feel it worked very well and so I am rewriting it this way with Elly and Nick's viewpoint alternating each chapter.

Thank you for the reviews already posted, it is very helpful to read what people think.

thanks

Tracey