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Bookends
By patterjack
25 September 2007

                        Bookends

 Composed in mind and calm upon the bench,
  cold marble hard beneath his aging  bones
  the old philosopher lies, his conversation stilled.
  With no more questions with which to assault his fellows
  now he can only turn to surrounding friends 
  and ask of Crito that he fulfill a last request:
  to clear a debt to the healer demigod.

  The gross epicurean with the wickedly agile brain
  is likewise stilled, while under the high heaped bedclothes
  Dame Quickly fumbles at his icecold feet;
  adds still more rugs to warm him, all in vain.
  There was, she  knew, but one way for him now.
  He too cries out upon his god, but she saw
  that at the turning of the tide, he had gone to Arthur's bosom.



  Alcibiades, Hal, both youthful princes
  two thousand years apart, corrupted it was claimed
  by their older mentors: a pattern easily construed 
  as part of man's matrix from the start of time,
  pre-empting a cruel rejection of them both.


  Lover of the world and lover of the worldly
  they proclaim a rounded balance;
  one saw the universe as grounded in goodness,
  the other became the icon of loved wickedness.
  Time and humanity have reconciled them both . 

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3445 comments posted) 25th September 2007
I've put this here in case you didn't get the first posting 
 
I’ve now read this a few times. I don’t think I have “got” it. Hal and Falstaff I think I got, but my knowledge of ancient Greek wasn’t up to understanding the second. I assumed it was Socrates but I decided it didn’t matter too much. I took my own meaning from it. I especially like the way you concentrated on the “lesser” [thought possibly more influential characters] and focussed on their deaths. I always find them far more fascinating and interesting than the great movers and shakers. 
Despite their faults they often hold the bigger picture and provide a sort of human and venal link to the larger than life figures. 
It did leave me wondering if time and humanity have reconciled the two lesser figures as well or perhaps we aren’t supposed to care. I have probably misinterpreted the piece but I suppose when read things we bring our own baggage to it. 
A profound piece that makes you work a bit but rewards the effort. 
cheers 
Jane 

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