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Is this Hell?
By echelon*mindfreak
25 September 2007

EPILOUGE
I opened my eyes.  I groaned at the imediate pain that rushed to my forehead.  What the hell did I do last night.  I arose and put my feet out over what I thought was the side of the bed.  When my feet hit the chilling water I immediatley pulled them back up.
"What the fuck, did I leave the bathtub on again."  I looked around, the dim lighting didnt help none.  I felt like I had a hangover and my body was numb. 
"Buddy!"  I called for my dog.  My eyes still adjusting to my surroundings. "'Mere' boy!.....gosh damnit."  I got up and put my feet into the water, when I stood it came to my knees.  "What the fucking hell."  I felt mud underneath, It took me a minute to realize, hey, this isnt my apartment.  I walked thru the bone chilling water when suddenly I tripped and immediatley grabbed hold of the nearest thing.  The whole ass of my jeans was wet now.   It just hit me that I had a lighter in my pocket, my heart racing and my boy shaking from the cold, I tried to strike it.  It wouldnt lite,  knew beacuse I was trying to hard and that I was wet.  The thing I was holding onto moved and groaned.  I screamed and stumbled backwards and tried once more to stike the lighter.  It finally lite and I noticed the thing i wa holding on to was a person.  I stumbled to my feet and jumped back on the table where I was before.
"Who the hell are you!"
His black hair hung in his face...as he looked up at me I noticed his face was beaten and he was bruised pretty badly.
"Welcome to hell."

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Omg...
Written by Dark_Angel (53 comments posted) 25th September 2007
DUDE! WHERE THE FUCK IS THE REST?!?!?!

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