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| The Gig - Part One | |
| By KeithBlakesley | ||||||
| 24 March 2005 | ||||||
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Down-and-out, CHARLIE CROWE befriends troubled University Student, DAZ WILLIS. The unlikely friendship allows CHARLIE to pull himself out of the gutter and DAZ to realise a fantastic dream as a musician in a musical extravaganza, the like of which the university and city of Lincoln have never seen before. However, things do not run smoothly as Music and Drama Society Chairperson, CANDICE, accompanied by Heavy Metal band member BEACON, do their utmost to try to disrupt the event. CAST LIST (IN ORDER) CHARLIE CROWE : A 73 year-old Geordie "tramp" DARREN (DAZ) WILLIS : A 20 year-old down-to-earth rich kid CHILD ONE : A 12 year-old Brat CHILD TWO : Another 12 year-old Brat STEVIE : A Chilled out Rocker PETER : A fellow student CANDICE : 21 year-old CHAIRPERSON BEACON : A long-haired male bruiser of a ROCKER WRENCH : A young female ROCKER DAZ'S FATHER : A well-dressed businessman MR FISHER : A middle-aged hearty man. COMMITTEE MEMBER MUSICIAN CONNOR EVANS: A pompous middle-aged male TV Producer. UNIVERSITY RECEPTIONIST : A Female ERNEST : A male pensioner WALTER : A male pensioner ARTHUR : A male pensioner FADE IN TO: TITLE, OPENING CREDITS and BIG BAND TITLE MUSIC over the following, EXT: HOMELESS MISSION. DAY We establish the front of the building where a sign on the wall proclaims, "The Disciple Mission For Care Of The Homeless". From within emerges MR. Douglas FISHER, the proprietor, who gently but firmly manhandles CHARLIE CROWE, a scruffy, bearded tramp out into the morning light. CHARLIE CROWE characteristically clasps a hand to his belt less, ragged trousers to hold them up. HE shuffles off down the street towards the City Centre. CUT TO: EXT: A LINCOLN STREET NEAR TOWN. DAY CHARLIE CROWE shuffles along the street, a sad, bitter scowl on his face. He is oblivious to the MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC who side step him with open disgust on their faces. Occasionally, he mutters to himself as he takes a look into a bin or two, trying to determine the contents. He continues on his way. CUT TO: TITLE, OPENING CREDITS, AND TITLE MUSIC FADE OUT. EXT: A LINCOLN PRECINCT AREA. DAY We follow CHARLIE CROWE, as he shuffles along, taking the odd peek through the windows of a Butchers and Bakers. All the while he talks to himself. CHARLIE CROWE: (A Geordie accent) FX: Faint, Slow, Background Big Band Music from another precinct. CHARLIE CROWE cocks his head, trying to determine the music direction and changes course. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) CUT TO: EXT: C&A PRECINCT AREA - WATERSIDE. DAY A five-piece music group plays the source of the Big Band music that CHARLIE is looking for. The band consists of DAZ WILLIS on Lead Alto Sax, STEVIE on Bass Guitar, KIERAN on drums, PETER on keyboard, and one other MUSICIAN on trumpet. They have an automatic synthesizer playing a backing track. Whilst the music continues, we move into a full frame shot of DAZ to establish him, as he is totally engrossed in a feeling of euphoria, as if his chains of bondage have, for the moment, been released. The music comes to a close, prompting some applause from the twenty, or so, MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC who are stood watching. CUT TO: EXT: A QUIETER LINCOLN PRECINCT AREA. DAY CHARLIE CROWE is almost in tears when he hears the music has stopped. CHARLIE CROWE: The MEMBER OF THE PUBLIC can't get of the way quick enough. While he is stood, FOUR CHILDREN, about eleven or twelve years old, round a corner and run up to taunt him. CHILD 2 looks like the leader of the pack. CHILD 1: CHILD 1 runs round the tramp, shouting. CHILD 1: CHILD 3 runs up behind CHARLIE CROWE and pushes him in the back. CHARLIE CROWE: CHARLIE CROWE swings an arm to the children and manages to cuff CHILD 2 on the arm. CHILD 2: He feigns death. CHILD 1: We see CHILD 2 pick up a handful of wet mud and throw it on to CHARLIE CROWE'S back and laughs. CHILD 2: They run off, laughing. CHARLIE CROWE just shuffles on his way. CUT TO: EXT: C&A PRECINCT AREA - WATERSIDE. DAY The group strike up with, "In the mood". CUT TO: EXT: A QUIETER LINCOLN PRECINCT AREA. DAY CHARLIE CROWE hears the mucsic once more and hones in on it. CUT TO: EXT: C&A PRECINCT AREA - WATERSIDE. DAY We see the crowd getting larger and more appreciative. When the piece has finished, applause greets the band as DAZ WILLIS counts them in straight away with, "Tommie's Boogie Woogie". We see the crowd is enjoying themselves until, suddenly....... We see a disturbance in the crowd, and shouts of abuse from MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC and taunts from children as CHARLIE CROWE barges his way through the crowd to the band. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: CHARLIE CROWE then paces back and forth in front of the band, oblivious to all, as he tries to mimic KIERAN, on the drums in a childish way. We see MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC look on in open amusement, all except DAZ WILLIS, who his too enraptured in his craft to notice. MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC are laughing, whilst others leave in embarrassment. The music concludes, and MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC applaud. CHARLIE CROWE shuffles from foot to foot and, since he no longer holds his trousers, we see them begin to fall. The crowd laugh even more. And now CHARLIE CROWE notices his whereabouts, his situation.....and the laughing, mocking crowd. We see sadness grip CHARLIE CROWE as he grabs his rags-for-trousers and pulls them back up. But, still enthralled at the band, he tries to get too close and he looks pleadingly at STEVIE. CHARLIE CROWE: CHARLIE CROWE, head bowed, sadly walks away to more giggles and laughter. STEVIE: (Continued) We see DAZ WILLIS look up for the fist time. DAZ WILLIS: STEVIE only shakes his head in disbelief. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: HIGH VANTAGE POINT From our high vantage point a long way off, we zoom back from a close up of the group and audience, up and out to a wide angle of the town centre in general, echoes of the mocking laughter lingering on until they are gone. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: - HIGH VANTAGE POINT FX: Backing Music - "Touching Stories" (Library Music) - Start From another part of town, from an equally high vantage point, we pan across the town and zoom to: CUT TO: EXT: A RIVERSIDE LOCATION OF RUBBLE AND SQUALOR. DAY FX: Background music continues CHARLIE CROWE, shuffles along the river bank away from town, carrying a sorry-looking bunch of flowers. The ruins of an old house can be seen from across the river. CHARLIE CROWE stops and stares across to the ruin. CHARLIE CROWE: He continues on his way along the river bank, away from the town. TIME CUT TO: EXT: CHURCH AND CEMETERY - BOULTHAM PARK. DAY: An exhausted CHARLIE CROWE approaches the gate of the serene and quiet Church at Boultham Park and enters the Cemetery, closing the gate behind him. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: He shuffles towards us, carrying the flowers, and kneels at a gravestone, his lower lip quivering. CHARLIE CROWE: He makes a weak and feeble attempt to tend the grave, but the enormity of the task is beyond him. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) He tends the grave some more. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) We leave CHARLIE CROWE kneeling in front of the grave FADE TO: EXT: LINCOLN CATHEDRAL . NIGHT We see the Cathedral from the South, floodlit and Gothic. CUT TO: EXT: LINCOLN CATHEDRAL. NIGHT We sweep across to the Brayford Pool to the University of Lincolnshire and Humberside, lit from within, the lights reflecting over the water. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: We see a floodlit sign at the entrance to the University proclaiming, "Lincoln Campus". CUT TO: INT: THE UNIVERSITY RECREATION AREA. NIGHT: DAZ WILLIS is talking on a Payphone. DAZ WILLIS: He slams the phone down and storms off. CUT TO: INT: THE UNIVERSITY MEETING HALL. NIGHT: DAZ WILLIS walks in passing a notice, "Special Meeting for Music and Drama Society - The Millennium Gig". The hall is somewhat crowded with FELLOW STUDENTS, who listen intently.. We see CANDICE, the Chairperson is stood at the front behind a lectern discussing the forthcoming event; the COMMITTEE MEMBERS sat behind her. CANDICE: (V.O.) We follow with a tight shot of DAZ WILLIS as he manages to get a seat that has been reserved for him by fellow student, PETER. DAZ WILLIS: (Narked) A VOICE from behind tries to hush the pair. DAZ WILLIS looks round to the voice, completely ignorant of it.
CANDICE notices the commotion. CANDICE: There are murmurs of agreement from the FELLOW STUDENTS. CANDICE: CUT TO: INT: THE UNIVERSITY - A CORRIDOR. NIGHT: DAZ WILLIS stands fuming in the corridor as the hall is emptying of the FELLOW STUDENTS. Many of them glance his way with expressions of open support. However, a few have hostile expressions as STEVIE approaches DAZ WILLIS. STEVIE:He laughs
DAZ WILLIS walks off leaving a bemused STEVIE. FADE TO: EXT: CHURCH AND CEMETERY - BOULTHAM PARK. DAY: We see CHARLIE CROWE curled up in the doorway of the church, an old cardboard sheet over him, like blanket. He wakes in the early morning light and wanders where he is. CHARLIE CROWE: He gets up with difficulty. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: - SOMEWHERE ELSE IN THE PARK. DAZ WILLIS walks the park, annoyed and deep in thought. STEVIE: (V.O) CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: CHARLIE CROWE is shuffling sadly out of the Cemetery. Although the weather is bright and sunny, and the birds sing, this does nothing to lift CHARLIE CROWE ‘s spirit. FX: Jazz Music Over As he walks, he hears the sounds of a jazz quartet playing in the near distance, within Boultham Park. He grins. CUT TO: EXT: BOULTHAM PARK. DAY FX: Jazz Music Over CHARLIE CROWE searches for the jazz quartet as the music gets louder. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE DAZ WILLIS registers the music and also looks for the source. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE The Jazz Quartet are set up in a corner of the park and are obviously merely buskers out practising together. The free-form jazz is exhilarating and invigorating. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE - CUT AS REQUIRED We see both CHARLIE CROWE and DAZ WILLIS come across the band from different directions, totally unaware of each other; both fully honed in on the music. They end up, still oblivious to each other, side by side, listening. CHARLIE CROWE resumes his exited stepping. The music seems to gather pace as the buskers are aware that they have an audience. One of the musicians gets carried away and plays a duff note. DAZ WILLIS and CHARLIE CROWE wince together. DAZ WILLIS: The music finally ends. DAZ WILLIS: (Clapping) DAZ WILLIS turns and looks at CHARLIE CROWE for the first time. He is momentarily shocked to realise who, or what, he is making conversation with. DAZ WILLIS: DAZ WILLIS merely nods an acknowledgement. He tries to put a discreet distance between himself and the tramp. CHARLIE CROWE at once realises the cold shoulder and retreats sadly into himself. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) DAZ WILLIS is at once contrite. He thrusts out his hand at CHARLIE CROWE. DAZ WILLIS: Now it's CHARLIE CROWE ‘s turn to be shocked. He tries to wipe his mucky hand on equally mucky trousers but finally shakes DAZ WILLIS' hand. CHARLIE CROWE: DAZ WILLIS has a flash of recognition at the name but is, at once, gone. He turns to walk away, CHARLIE following. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) DAZ WILLIS smiles but is lost in his own thoughts. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing)CHARLIE CROWE finally grins CHARLIE CROWE: We leave the pair as the continue their walk. CUT TO: EXT: BRAYFORD POOL. DAY We sweep across the water of the Brayford over to the University. CUT TO: INT: UNIVERSITY RECREATION ROOMS. DAY A group of four heavy rock musicians: BEACON, WRENCH and TWO NOISY ROCKERS are gathered round CANDICE. BEACON and WRENCH are sharing tongues. CANDICE: CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE PETER is watching the proceedings from a distance in the shadows. He listens intently. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: CANDICE: (Continuing). Wrench gives him a dig in the ribs. CANDICE: CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE Muffled discussion from CANDICE is heard by PETER. He is both shocked and excited and quickly moves back into the shadows. CUT TO: EXT: BOULTHAM PARK. DAY CHARLIE CROWE and DAZ WILLIS have left the band and are walking the park. DAZ WILLIS has to walk slowly to keep with CHARLIE CROWE'S shuffle. CHARLIE CROWE: DAZ WILLIS reflects. DAZ WILLIS: CHARLIE CROWE looks at himself. CHARLIE CROWE: He shuffles ahead. DAZ WILLIS is concerned and runs after CHARLIE CROWE. DAZ WILLIS: CHARLIE CROWE cools off. CHARLIE CROWE: DAZ WILLIS: CHARLIE CROWE cannot believe his ears. Recognition, after all these years! DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) We see CHARLIE CROWE doesn't know if to be offended but DAZ WILLIS smiles back warmly. CUT TO: EXT: LINCOLN. NIGHT We see the University by night, with Lincoln Cathedral in the background. CUT TO: INT: HALL OF RESIDENCE. NIGHT DAZ WILLIS is sat with STEVIE, PETER and FELLOW BAND MEMBERS. They are all in high spirits as they lounge and relax. Some FELLOW BAND MEMBERS clean instruments, while others listen to personal CD players. DAZ WILLIS plays a few notes on his Saxophone, checking it, completely oblivious to the rest. STEVIE has a sudden, funny thought and starts to laugh. FELLOW BAND MEMBER 1 STEVIE: CUT TO: EXT: A TOWN STREET. NIGHT CHARLIE CROWE is in a doorway rummaging down a bin. Suddenly from up the street we can hear the raucous voices of CANDICE, BEACON, an uncomfortable-looking WRENCH, and the TWO ROCKERS, as they approach and walk by CHARLIE CROWE. CANDICE: CHARLIE CROWE pricks his ears up at the mention of DAZ's name. CHARLIE CROWE: Curious, CHARLIE CROWE picks up on the conversation and tags along behind. CUT TO: INT: HALL OF RESIDENCE. NIGHT In the background DAZ'S FATHER enters the room, wearing an expensive Camel coat and looking round. DAZ WILLIS' back is toward his Father, so he cannot be seen, and the cacophony of noise partly drowns the sound of the Saxophone. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE. STEVIE notices DAZ'S FATHER and kicks DAZ WILLIS' shin. DAZ WILLIS: DAZ WILLIS stops playing. PETER follows STEVIE'S gaze. PETER: PETER grabs the Saxophone from DAZ WILLIS and buries it among the FELLOW BAND MEMBERS. DAZ'S FATHER: DAZ WILLIS looks round, dismayed, embarrassed and angry at the same time. He gets up and approaches his Father. DAZ WILLIS: All eyes look on. DAZ WILLIS: DAZ'S FATHER goes to steer DAZ WILLIS out of the room, but he is having none of it, and side-steps out of the way. DAZ WILLIS: (Continued) With that he turns on his heal and strides out leaving the silent residents looking at DAZ WILLIS. FADE TO: EXT: BRAYFORD POOL. DAY We sweep across the Brayford pool, to the University. EXT: BRAYFORD POOLSIDE - UNIVERSITY. DAY DAZ, PETER and STEVIE and the other FELLOW BAND MEMBERS, sit outside talking. DAZ WILLIS is dejected. PETER: He gets up and goes inside. Shortly, CHARLIE CROWE rounds a corner from the forecourt and approaches the group. STEVIE: Everyone is laughing.......all except DAZ WILLIS, who has just emerged from the building. CHARLIE CROWE turns and quickly shuffles away, angry and close to tears. DAZ WILLIS is outraged. DAZ WILLIS: All eyes turn to DAZ WILLIS, who glares back angrily at the group as he chases after CHARLIE CROWE. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) CHARLIE CROWE: He Shuffles away. DAZ WILLIS can only stand there, mute. Then he turns angrily back towards the group. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE DAZ WILLIS approaches STEVIE and PETER. DAZ WILLIS: There is much sniggering. DAZ WILLIS: He turns and walks away towards town, and CHARLIE. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing)
CONTINUED IN PART TWO
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