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| The Sunflower | |
| By Keller | ||||||
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Not sure if this one is managing to get anywhere in the right direction - some suggestions would be great! Thanks In this dark you are a shadow of a man: your cavernous eyes turned my way, your shoulder hunched against discovery, a concealed parcel tucked under your arm. Your seeded eyes view this garden with such suspiscion, your coat pulled tighter against the weary drudging of time and the tiresome decay of your flesh. You have watched spring fade to autumn: your blooms turn cracked and dry and found no impulse to fight it; your foot rooted in the earth that spins away your life. The moonlight makes you a man, Was it all you dreamt it would be? It never stops unless you stop it.
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