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By november
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31 August 2005 |
my first poem, any constructive criticism is welcome! I'm a seascape you painted
Look closely, amid the blues and greens
You'll see a part of your soul, lost in the waves
Yet you've put me aside, lost and forgotten I'm a flower compressed within the pages of a book
My once silky petals, now dull and papery
Your scent embodied within me
Yet I lie in the heart of this book, lost and forgotten
I'm a seashell you put against your ear
Listening to the waves flowing across the shore
Reminding you of the salty breeze
Yet I sit in the back of a cupboard, lost and forgotten
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Written by jean.day (2279 comments posted) 22nd September 2005 | | I enjoyed this poem very much. As your first effort, you have done very well. |
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