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| A Marriage Bizarre | |
| By William87 | ||||||
| 01 October 2007 | ||||||
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I've wanted to try and write lyrics for a song or something, but uh, I'm not well educated on it. So, I just sorta tried it in my own sort of way. This is my first attempt. I guess it's closest to the peotry category than any of the others. Instead of writing out chorus:, I wrote it with an apstrophe. /William My own thoughts; I guess it could need more to it if it's going to be a song, but this is mainly the core of it. I feel I can add more. But, I don't know, maybe this is enough? Also I'm a bit worried I might be repeating the chorus too much!
"One times too many One times too few I struck my honey With the flu" I said; I was sorry That I miss you, Honey I wish you missed me too "One times too many One times too few I struck my Honey With the flu" Oh- Please forgive me? I want you back- Here with Me "One times too many One times too few I fought my marriage- Just like you" We combined a word That I wished was ‘Love’ But I guess I was wrong- All along Somewhere on the side Our ways collide "One times too many One times too few" Again it happened- A marriage bizarre She even took- My guitar "One times too many One times too few I struck my honey With the flu"
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