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Poetry
The Unknown
By PurpleFairy
01 October 2007
You can only hold on for so long,
Until you have to let go.
Only so many tears you can cry,
Before they run dry.
The sun can only burn for so long,
Until the world is shrouded in darkness.
What happens when you reach this point?
When all light is extinguished,
All feelings lost,
When all you want is for the pain to stop. 

What happens then?

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Written by Phil (6828 comments posted) 2nd October 2007
Pick yourself up, dust yourself down and start again - or perhaps it wasn't a direct question.  
 
Phil. 
 

Written by Josie (2823 comments posted) 4th October 2007
"When all you want is for the pain to stop"? Physical pain: take an aspirin. Emotional pain? Do something good for other people because when you do good for others, you cheer yourself up at the same time. Stop looking inwards and start looking outwards always works. I assume you were asking a question too.

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