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| The Gig - Part Two | |
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This follows The Gig - Part One, posted seperately EXT: LINCOLN HIGH ST. PRECINCT AREA. DAY CHARLIE CROWE shuffles up the street, angry thoughts of DAZ WILLIS playing on his mind. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE - OUTSIDE AN AUDIO /VISUAL SHOP. He approaches the shop and........ we see from CHARLIE CROWE'S Point of View, a sign proclaiming, "Free Internet Access - Create your own Web site!" We then see the quizzical look on CHARLIE CROWE'S face. CHARLIE CROWE: Intrigued CHARLIE CROWE glances in the shop window at the array of computers on show. He has never seen them before. He shakes his head in bewilderment. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) He is about to walk away when he notices a TV monitor image of himself, caught by a video camera on sale. He studies the image of himself intently. CUT TO: INT: BLACK & WHITE FIFTIES STAGE ENSEMBLE. NIGHT CHARLIE CROWE ‘s mind wanders back to Yesteryear, to a much younger CHARLIE CROWE joining the rest of a large orchestra taking an encore after a performance. The younger face of CHARLIE CROWE transforms back to: CUT TO: EXT: AUDIO VISUAL SHOP WINDOW. DAY CHARLIE CROWE ‘s eyes betray a tear. Slowly, as the veil lifts, CHARLIE CROWE takes in the image of himself; the dirty rags; the thick matted hair and beard; the grubby hands. As if for the first time ever, a look of incomprehension crosses his face and CHARLIE CROWE feels disgust at the sight of himself. He slowly backs away from the image, away from himself. MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC curse as he backs into them inadvertently. Finally a look of resolve mixed with anger falls on CHARLIE CROWE, and he moves away up the street. CUT TO: EXT: LINCOLN HIGH ST. RAILWAY CROSSING. DAY The Barriers drop down just as DAZ WILLIS rushes towards us, looking for Charlie. He impatiently waits for a train to rumble past (let's say a freight train, it'll take longer!) CUT TO: EXT: LINCOLN HIGH ST. PRECINCT AREA. DAY CHARLIE CROWE shuffles past another window and watches his shuffling gait. CHARLIE CROWE: MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC turn and stare. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) The MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC begin to snigger. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) He lifts his chin and walks off as the MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC laugh at him. CUT TO: EXT: LINCOLN HIGH ST. PRECINCT AREA. DAY DAZ WILLIS trots up the High Street, in despair, looking for Charlie. MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC around him grumble as he bumps past them, oblivious. CUT TO: EXT: LINCOLN BROADGATE AREA. DAY CHARLIE CROWE walks over the Footbridge away from Town. He reaches the other side and starts up BROADGATE towards Monks Road. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE DAZ WILLIS rounds a corner from the Bus Station and catches a glimpse of CHARLIE through the mid-day traffic. DAZ WILLIS: Charlie!! CHARLIE!!! WAIT!!! CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE CHARLIE CROWE cannot hear through the noise of the traffic, and rounds the corner of Rumbold Street, out of site. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE DAZ WILLIS is not able to see where CHARLIE went due to the heavy traffic (Juggernauts or Buses), and takes one, final look, and then turns back towards the University, head bowed. CUT TO: EXT: HOMELESS MISSION. DAY CHARLIE CROWE shuffles up to the building. He is about to enter but his way is barred as Mr FISHER meets him on the doorstep. MR. FISHER:(to a child) CHARLIE CROWE makes to skirt round, but is no match for the relatively younger MR. FISHER. MR. FISHER: MR. FISHER softens. MR. FISHER: CHARLIE CROWE skips inside. MR. FISHER: TIME CUT TO: INT: BATH HOUSE. DAY We establish the interior of a grubby looking bathhouse. The water running out of the bath plug is positively disgusting, but then we see a cleaner CHARLIE CROWE wrapped round with a blanket. All that is left, is the hair and beard. Without thinking he delves into a nearby waste-bin and pulls out an old grimy disposable razor. Then he realises with disgust what he has done and drops it back in the bin, and washes his hand again. CHARLIE CROWE looks at the pile of old rags that served as his clothes. He side-steps them as if they might jump up at him. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: CHARLIE CROWE approaches his dirty bed with another look of disgust. He swallows and then dives underneath it to retrieve a handful of coins he has stashed under there. CUT TO: EXT: HOMELESS MISSION. DAY MR. FISHER is shocked to see CHARLIE CROWE wrapped only in the blanket. He holds the handful of loose change MR. FISHER: CHARLIE CROWE barefoots it up the street looking for a Charity Shop. MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC are equally shocked. CUT TO: EXT: A CHARITY SHOP. DAY CHARLIE CROWE enters the shop. CUT TO: INT: A CHARITY SHOP. DAY The SALES ASSISTANT is shocked as CHARLIE CROWE enters. He quickly peruses the rails near a carrousel. A CUSTOMER is busy looking at the clothes on the carrousel in the centre of the shop. She moves aside in bewilderment as CHARLIE CROWE continues up the rail. The SALES ASSISTANT 's mild shock turns to wide-eyed astonishment as CHARLIE CROWE grabs a Gent's suit and dives into the changing cubicle, throwing his blanket to the floor just as he enters. The SALES ASSISTANT and CUSTOMER can only stare and shrug at each other. TIME CUT TO: EXT: CHARITY SHOP. DAY CHARLIE CROWE emerges from the shop looking smarter and more fully clothed than he has in years. He moves off, away from Town, looking for somewhere else. CUT TO: EXT: A BARBER SHOP. DAY We establish the shop as CHARLIE CROWE approaches it with something akin to trepidation. The price is shown in the window, "£2.50 O.A.P.'s". He examines the remaining coins in his hands. There isn't enough. CHARLIE CROWE paces back and forth, wondering what to do. Finally, he enters the shop. CUT TO: INT: BARBER SHOP. DAY FX: Building, Big Band Backing track over the following scenes. A broom is thrust into CHARLIE CROWE'S hands and he starts sweeping up. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE CHARLIE CROWE washes the work surfaces and the sinks. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE Hair and Beard are seen falling to the floor at the feet of CHARLIE CROWE who is sat in the chair. TIME CUT TO: EXT: BARBERS SHOP. DAY FX: The music reaches a climatic conclusion just as..... We finally see the complete transformation as CHARLIE CROWE exits the shop and stands admiring himself in the shop window reflection. We see a cleaner, younger looking, and perhaps even distinguished-looking CHARLIE CROWE. FADE TO: EXT: BRAYFORD POOL The University, across the Brayford. CUT TO: INT: UNIVERSITY HALL. DAY DAZ WILLIS is sat in a quiet corner of the hall. STEVIE enters; the other MEMBERS OF THE BAND at a discreet distance. They urge STEVIE on. STEVIE: DAZ WILLIS looks up and round to see a sorry bunch of people looking at him. DAZ WILLIS: All eyes change as everyone takes the last remark on board.. DAZ WILLIS: He turns away bitterly. PETER steps forward. PETER: DAZ WILLIS shows no sign of relenting. PETER: (Continuing) Suddenly it sinks in to DAZ WILLIS' mind. DAZ WILLIS: STEVIE, contrite, turns and exits, pulling by PETER and the remaining MEMBERS OF THE BAND, with him. STEVIE: (Continuing) CUT TO: INT: UNIVERSITY CORRIDOR. DAY The group approach a door to a small room. A sign proclaims, "Audio Storeroom". CUT TO: INT: A UNIVERSITY STOREROOM. DAY STEVIE, PETER and a few other MEMBERS OF THE BAND sneak into the room, which is laden with Amps, Speakers and other pieces of sound equipment. The emblems on the side of the equipment suggest the Heavy Metal Rock band. They stand looking at it all. PETER: They all laugh as STEVIE makes ready to damage an Amp. Just then DAZ WILLIS walks into the room. DAZ WILLIS: He turns on his heel and leaves them to it. Eventually they all file out of the room, everything just as it was. CUT TO: EXT: THE UNIVERSITY MAIN DRIVE. DAY A determined DAZ WILLIS runs towards us up the drive, the University building looming behind. CUT TO: EXT: THE RIVER WITHAM BANK. DAY DAZ WILLIS continues to run towards us, away from the City, and towards the park. CUT TO: EXT: THE CEMETERY. DAY DAZ WILLIS approaches the Cemetery gate, searching the graveyard. He enters. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE DAZ WILLIS approaches Gwen's grave and is somewhat startled at the sight of CHARLIE CROWE, polished and scrubbed, knelt at the graveside. DAZ WILLIS keeps a discreet distance, and CHARLIE CROWE doesn't seem to know DAZ WILLIS is there....but he does. CHARLIE CROWE: CHARLIE CROWE laughs CHARLIE CROWE: He laughs harder. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) With that he gets to his feet and hobbles off. DAZ WILLIS: He chases after CHARLIE CROWE. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) CHARLIE CROWE stops and turns. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) Now it's DAZ WILLIS' turn to walk away. CHARLIE CROWE is thoughtful. CHARLIE CROWE: DAZ WILLIS stops. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) DAZ WILLIS: CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE. DAZ WILLIS: DAZ WILLIS nods CHARLIE CROWE: (Continued) He walks ahead leaving us looking at a disappointed DAZ WILLIS. CUT TO: INT: A LOCAL PUB. NIGHT DAZ WILLIS is addressing a large group of FELLOW STUDENTS. Also in attendance are members of the MUSIC AND DRAMA SOCIETY COMMITTEE. CANDICE and the ROCK BAND MEMBERS sit in silence off to one side, forced to have to attend and listen to the accusations put against them. DAZ WILLIS: There are general murmurs of agreement from all around the assembly. The MUSIC AND DRAMA SOCIETY COMMITTEE sit away talking among themselves, discussing the issue. CANDICE:More murmuring of agreement.
All hands rise in unison except, that is, CANDICE and the ROCK BAND MEMBERS. COMMITTEE MEMBER: The ROCK BAND MEMBERS are gutted. They storm out angrily, followed by a bitter CANDICE. TIME CUT TO: EXT: GIG REHEARSAL VENUE. DAY We establish the exterior as musicians carrying instruments, enter the building. A sign is posted outside, "The Gig Auditions and Rehearsals". CUT TO: INT: GIG REHEARSAL VENUE. DAY The large rehearsal hall (with stage) is crammed with pockets of MUSICIANS, jamming, tuning, arguing, laughing, and general bedlam. We see DAZ WILLIS stood watching the proceedings, wandering what the hell he got into. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE DAZ WILLIS: No response. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) Still no response. He grabs a passing MUSICIAN. DAZ WILLIS:(Continuing) We see DAZ WILLIS notice noticing A MUSICIAN playing a Didgeridoo and another MUSICIAN playing a skiffle board. DAZ WILLIS:(Continuing) He lets the MUSICIAN continue on his way as he approaches the Didgeridoo MUSICIAN. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing)er....excuse me? DAZ WILLIS walks off in a huff. When he's out of earshot, The MUSICIANS bursts out laughing at the obvious joke. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE CONNOR EVANS walks in to the hall and surveys the sight. He is directed over to DAZ WILLIS. CONNOR EVANS:He turns away with new found authority, jumps onto the stage DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) The noise begins to diminish, all except a louder voice chatting below. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) All falls quiet. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) TIME CUT TO: INT: GIG REHEARSAL VENUE HALLWAY. DAY CANDICE peeks her head round into the hall, BEACON at her side. BEACON: He starts to laugh as he walks away. CANDICE looks on, confused. Finally she looks back into the hall. CUT TO: INT: GIG REHEARSAL VENUE. DAY Something is nagging at DAZ WILLIS. Then he realises someone's missing. DAZ WILLIS: DAZ WILLIS turns and faces CONNOR EVANS then notices CANDICE back away from the doorway.
He dashes after her. CUT TO: EXT: GIG REHEARSAL VENUE. DAY CANDICE is walking away as DAZ WILLIS bursts out into the daylight. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) She stops, but does not turn. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) A Smile creeps onto her face as the penny drops at Beacon's words. CANDICE: She turns and walks away. FADE TO: EXT: THE UNIVERSITY. DAY We see the University and Marina from the West End Bridge. CUT TO: INT: THE UNIVERSITY. DAY DAZ WILLIS is talking to STEVIE and PETER as CONNOR EVANS walks into the room. CONNOR EVANS: DAZ WILLIS shakes his head. CONNOR EVANS: He turns away from CONNOR EVANS and faces DAZ WILLIS as he walks away; a malicious leer on his face. CUT TO: INT: A GENERAL OFFICE AT THE UNIVERSITY. DAY We establish the exterior of the office, complete with sign over the door. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE We see the front page of a Fax emerge from a fax machine, addressed to DAZ WILLIS. It is marked, "URGENT!" CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE The UNIVERSITY RECEPTIONIST collects the fax and staples the several sheets together. She notices CANDICE walking past the office window and bangs on the glass to attract her attention. Shortly CANDICE enters the office. CANDICE: She takes the fax and walks away. CUT TO: INT: A UNIVERSITY CORRIDOR. DAY CANDICE regards the fax as she passes a waste bin. She pauses, wondering whether to just bin the document. Decency gets the better of her and she refrains from ditching it. CUT TO: INT: THE UNIVERSITY RECREATION AREA. DAY MEMBERS OF THE BIG BAND stand around talking with DAZ WILLIS. A BAND MEMBER: A serious CANDICE enters. STEVIE: Accusing eyes look on as they all fall quiet. CANDICE: DAZ WILLIS notices the seriousness on her face. DAZ WILLIS: DAZ WILLIS takes the document and scans the header page. His eyes widen in shock. CANDICE: (Continuing) CANDICE merely nods and turns and walks away. DAZ WILLIS hangs back, then goes after her. DAZ WILLIS: (Continuing) DAZ giggles DAZ WILLIS: And he does! TIME CUT TO: EXT: THE HOGSHEAD PUB. NIGHT We establish the pub next to the University. CUT TO: INT: THE HOGSHEAD PUB. NIGHT CANDICE is stood up in front of a drunk BEACON, WRENCH and the other ROCK BAND MEMBERS. BEACON regards DAZ WILLIS as if he is something he has stepped on, as he walks in and stands beside CANDICE. BEACON:DAZ WILLIS lunges to grab BEACON but is intercepted by CANDICE.
WRENCH:There are general nods of resignation, approval and giving-in. CANDICE: (Continuing) CANDICE and DAZ WILLIS can only wonder. FADE TO: EXT: THE BRAYFORD POOL. DAY We establish a long shot view of the University and Main Entrance Forecourt, which is decked with a stage and audience seating. On the stage are musicians which form the Band of the University Gig. Television Cameras cover numerous angles, cables leading to OB Vans We see an enormous band warming up, watched by local DIGNITARIES, FELLOW STUDENTS and MEMBERS OF THE PUBLIC sat in a makeshift amphitheatre. Yet, seen closely, we see various MEMBERS OF THE BAND mouthing questions to each other, "where's Daz?". Negative shrugs of various shoulders tell us he is not about. CUT TO: INT: A UNIVERSITY CORRIDOR. DAY DAZ WILLIS and STEVIE are stood side by side of KIERAN, a very nervous looking drummer. STEVIE: KIERAN withdraws even more. DAZ WILLIS: DAZ belts STEVIE in the ribs. KIERAN looks away, mortified......straight into the eyes of BEACON, stood at the end of the corridor. It's too much for the gibbering KIERAN, as he clutches his Appendix and passes out. FADE TO: INT: THE UNIVERSITY MEETING HALL. DAY CONNOR EVANS passes back and forth, livid. CANDICE and DAZ WILLIS look on. CONNOR EVANS: He continues pacing. DAZ WILLIS ,oblivious to all else, is pacing too, waiting. Then a distinctly nervous CHARLIE CROWE is ushered in. DAZ WILLIS: A relieved DAZ WILLIS approaches CHARLIE CROWE. CONNOR EVANS: (Continuing) DAZ WILLIS: CONNOR EVANS takes CHARLIE CROWE round the shoulders and leads him to the door. CONNOR EVANS: CHARLIE CROWE resists and stands still, unable to move CHARLIE CROWE: CHARLIE CROWE looks round slowly to the voice. He cannot believe his eyes. Tears well in his eyes. His long lost friend stands in the doorway. CHARLIE CROWE: They approach each other and embrace long and hard as: CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) They embrace again. We see CHARLIE CROWE'S eyes widen further. Two other "old soldiers", complete with Trilby's and Trench Coats over the arms, walk in and take in the scene. CHARLIE CROWE: (Continuing) All four embrace each other, each trying to talk first. ERNEST: WALTER: ARTHUR: Walter, you old dog! Where did they drag you from? Boys!, I can't believe this! Where did you go? The boy said the trip would be Worth it! CHARLIE CROWE: At that, STEVIE, PETER and a few other MEMBERS OF THE BAND walk in very humbly and approach CHARLIE CROWE. STEVIE: CHARLIE CROWE can only nod. DAZ WILLIS steps up. DAZ WILLIS: The four old-timers regard each other, a twinkle in their eye's ARTHUR: With that they exit. CUT TO: EXT: THE BRAYFORD POOL. DAY There is a polite applause as the CHARLIE CROWE and his FRIENDS climb onto the stage along with STEVIE, CANDICE - electric guitar in hand - and finally, DAZ WILLIS. They settle into their places, CHARLIE CROWE on the drums. CUT TO: EXT: TV O.B. RECORDING ROOM. DAY We establish the exterior of the O.B. Van, as CONNOR EVANS climbs into it. CUT TO: INT: TV O.B. RECORDING ROOM. DAY CONNOR EVANS enters the room and takes his place at the production desk. CONNOR EVANS: A unison of agreements prompts CONNOR EVANS into action. He puts on a head set and microphone. CONNOR EVANS: (Continuing) TV ASSISTANT: CUT TO: EXT: THE BRAYFORD POOL. DAY The months of planning are over. Planning, luck and a tail wind show through as the Brayford reverberates to a crescendo of classical Big Band Jazz complimented by Heavy Rock Rhythms and Riffs. We see CHARLIE CROWE and FRIENDS pick up the beat and tempo and play as if they had rehearsed all along! CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE We see DAZ'S FATHER looking on from a long way off, across the Brayford. He does not show any pride, or feeling to what his Son is involved with. He feels nothing at all. With a slight shake of the head, he turns and walks in the opposite direction. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: CANDICE and DAZ WILLIS regard each other while they are playing. We know they are going somewhere in the future. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: BEACON looks on from another place, totally envious, jealous and deflated. He is sober and without his drink, he knows what he has missed out on. He skulks off. CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE: The AUDIENCE are responsive as, ultimately, a swinging foot stamping piece ends the show, with CHARLIE CROWE playing out with a magnificent, improvised drum solo climaxing with the combined strength of Big and Heavy Rock bands. We close on the rapturous, standing crowd of Lincoln! FADE TO: EXT: A LINCOLN CEMETERY. DAY The reverberating echo of the standing ovation lingers as DAZ WILLIS makes his way up the Cemetery towards Gwen's grave, carrying a bunch of flowers. We can hear CHARLIE CROWE talking to his Wife. CHARLIE CROWE: (V.O.) DAZ WILLIS gets up and walks away leaving us looking at the epitaph of Charlie Crowe, "A tormented man of great Wisdom who gave this world so much". CUT TO: AUDIO: Slow, Glen Miller Wartime Big Band Classic over ....... END CREDITS FADE OUT THE END
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