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Poetry
Lime Light
By Keller
04 October 2007
This piece was made from a collage of words cut from a newspaper, very few of the words were written between the piece of newspaper.

The methadone bride shows her
twisted silhouette at the end-of-the-pier
theatre.
Each night pushing to transform the look
with another double-barrelled revelation.
Season to season she is confirmed:
the angel of the stage.
But they only invest indifference
in their glorious apparition.
While she invests in another
one-way ticket to her murder scene.
Oh!  Tormented mercy!
Each night engulfed in this illegal war
each night a product of guilt that she vowed.
Inside this glitz and glamour fortress,
she paints a face of
fun and love and heartache,
while her instincts search for
death in the street.

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Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 4th October 2007
Not normally keen on 'constructed' poetry. (Do I mean constructed?) But this definitely had something. 
 
The four lines: 
 
Oh! Tormented mercy! 
Each night engulfed in this illegal war 
each night a product of guilt that she vowed. 
Inside this glitz and glamour fortress, 
 
had me tuning out for a while, but that may just be me. 
 
Phil.

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