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Like Yoga
By november
02 September 2005

Being in love with you

Is like yoga

My mind

So serene

Flotating in the heavens

 

My eyes closed 

With visions of us

Dancing upon the clouds

 

Bathing in a

Deep well of meditation

My cheeks rosy

I'm feeling like an angel

 

I open my eyes

And standing before me

You smile at me

And I know its more than yoga

It's you and me

Like strawberries and yogurt

 

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Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 23rd October 2005
RE this poem: 
 
I like attempts at bubble wrapping and preserving "a moment" so it lasts for ever. 
 
Which is what your poems succeeds in doing. 
 
What a shame we can only do it in words and not real life. 
 
Brian

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