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Poetry
Yellow
By Phil
06 October 2007

More fruity stupidity.


The banana,

A suggestive fruit.

Curved for pleasure

In a yellow suit.

Elongated

With a slippery skin,

Peel it back

And slip it in.

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Written by stevetroster (1588 comments posted) 6th October 2007
Phil, I thought we'd stopped playing silly buggers, obviously not!! 
This made me laugh out loud, well done. 
Viva La Lewd Revolution. 
 
All the best, 
Steve

Written by Phil (6845 comments posted) 6th October 2007
Thanks Steve. We may have, but I don't think I have. :grin  
 
Phil.

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3449 comments posted) 6th October 2007
As I still haven't risen to your challenge I am in no position to comment on this. They might be silly but they're trickier to do than you'd think 
cheers 
Jane
Hi Phil
Written by jean.day (2327 comments posted) 6th October 2007
This reminds me of the advert where the lady is always trying to think of new ways of being naughty (since malteasers have so few calories.)

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 10th October 2007
The form is as good as ever, but the content is getting worse and worse :p

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