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But since you brought it up...
By andybyers
09 October 2007
I’ve always wanted to do a TV show called Crispy Waltons. It would be just like The Waltons, except that instead of the show ending with them all saying good night, it would start with that. Then, after a few moments of silence, you’d see a flicker of flame in somebody’s window. To cries of alarm, you would see the fire quickly spread from room to room, closing off any avenue of escape. Then, for the next hour (not counting commercials), you would watch the house slowly burn to the ground. I think people would like it. The only problem I can see in pitching it to the networks is what do you do for the second episode? I suppose you could watch the same thing happen at Ike Godsey’s place, or that house where those two booze-bag spinsters live (man, that place would go up like the Hindenburg), but really, that just drags out the problem. Still, I think it’s a good premise… it just needs a little work, that’s all.

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3362 comments posted) 10th October 2007
OK love the pitch, great concept. We think it's got legs. We'll commission the series. We've got J-Lo on board and Clooney has been approached and Will Smith will play all the kids.We just want a pilot script and outline for 6 more episodes with some sample dialogue. Is next week good for you?

Written by coosh (868 comments posted) 10th October 2007
...or, do a different family each week. Episode 2: Crispy Partridge (with Steve Coogan), Crispy Corleone, etc... the Bin Ladens will string out the last 3 programmes, as there are about 184 of them... although some may get a head start on you.

Written by woody44 (775 comments posted) 5th November 2007
How about a burning studio full of dancing wanabes, and then send Bruce Forsythe in just as the roof collapses. (With apologize to the tragic event in Worcestershire) 
 
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